Well, it’s back to collocation. Collocation, or more specifically, bad collocation, is one reason people cannot achieve IELTS 7 or 8. It’s certainly something to work on. Here is the next set of sentences for you to look at.
Time to Practice
Can you ‘fix’ the following sentences by changing (or removing) the colouredword? There may be different ways to answer this. The answers will be in the next collocation post.
The sunshine is very seriouson higher mountains.
The two cars crushedinto each other.
Mountain climbers admitto the risk.
The public dothe highest contribution.
The river water was rushed.
Everyone doessome mistakes.
Museums have significantmasterpieces.
Museums offer extracurricular teaching.
Answers to Collocation 2 of 6
We can warn about the health risk of cigarettes. . [‘Promote’ is for positive things.]
Compulsory military service can strengthenthe military.
Some criminals commit seriouscrimes.
This will prevent them from makingthe wrong decision.
It is their rightto do it.
This disease could affecttheir health. [‘Influence’ is for positive things.]